My 15K manuscript notes service

Get A Pro's POV On Your Writing

"Jason Arnopp is the first person I turn to when it's time to edit my work. His notes manage to be completely sympathetic to what I'm trying to achieve whilst at the same time never letting me get away with easy shortcuts or parts that are not as good as they have to be. To me, he's the perfect reader" – John Higgs, author of Love And Let Die.

"Can't thank you enough for doing this service for my manuscript. Really amazing job, far exceeded my expectations, and even had timely turnaround" – Giacomo Kyle


What I Offer

For authors wanting a professional assessment of up to 15,000 words of their work:

✅ Get Ready for Submission: Prepare your first three chapters for agents or publishers with a fresh, critical perspective.
✅ Strengthen Your Opening: Ensure the beginning of your novel captivates readers and conveys that they are in safe hands.
✅ Self-Publishing Ready: Make the first chunk of your novel shine, maximising its impact on platforms like Amazon.


Service Details

I’ll read up to 15,000 words of your work and provide:

🔥 Overall Readiness: Evaluating how ready your work is for submission to agent - or if you plan to self-publish, for readers to buy.
🔥 Strengths Highlighted: Identifying what’s working well in your writing.
🔥 Detailed Feedback: Offering in-depth suggestions on clarity, characterisation, prose, plot, dialogue and more.


1-to-1 Notes

Writers receive my notes verbally via a complimentary 1-to-1 Zoom call, after which they receive a transcript of the call. Follow-up email support available for any clarifications.

"When I read Jason Arnopp’s excellent supernatural novel Ghoster and noticed he offered a manuscript feedback service, I jumped at the chance. His feedback was comprehensive and thoughtful on both structure and detail. I’d use Jason’s services again without hesitation and strongly advise any writer who feels at all stuck to do the same" – Paul F. Butler, author of Mina’s Child


How To Book Me

This service is only available to members of my free community Author Confidence Lounge on the excellent and fast-rising Skool platform.

Author Confidence Lounge helps authors remove psychological roadblocks so they can write freely and pursue their dream of getting published. When you sign up, you can check out the current price of my and easily pay for the service by credit card using the secure and universally-known Stripe.


Why Trust My Opinion?

📚 I'm the author of the novels Ghoster, The Last Days Of Jack Sparks, and Friday The 13th: Hate-Kill-Repeat. I’ve written for Doctor Who, co-written Inside Black Mirror, and worked on films including Stormhouse and the Peter Mullan movie The Man Inside. I worked with Hollywood director Ron Howard on a planned adaptation of my Jack Sparks novel. 

"Jason's knowledge and skill in assessing writers’ work, and giving feedback in a clear and constructive manner are second to none" – Sam Burton, Creative Industries Project Officer


Want To Go Above And Beyond?

Would you like pro feedback on more than 15,000 words? On an entire novel, perhaps?

​When you join Author Confidence Lounge, I'll offer you a free 1-to-1 onboarding call, so that we can discuss your needs and also figure out your biggest creative roadblock. 

Let’s bulletproof your writing!

"Jason gave me some excellent wood-for-trees help" – Andrew Ellard, script editor of Red Dwarf, Miranda, The IT Crowd

See you in the Lounge soon!